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In the rain with a knife

Getting ready to end my life

As each rain drop hits my face

I start to remember all my pain

I drop the knife to the ground

Does not even make a sound

Soon tears start to roll down my face

Just more drops in the Rain

Somehow each tear that fell

Made my pain start to heal

I took my face and looked to the sky

But something soon caught my eye

A single flower stood in the grass

Made me want to try and ask

But instead I Smiled and Walked away

Got to live another day

Just more tear drops in the rain
Something I wrote a while back
PoisonHorsie Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2016
How far back? This is great. Intentional or not, that flower is an wonderful metaphor for Ponies.
HazetheHawk13 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 7, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't know how far back but I know that at the time that I was still being held =as a slave and having horrible things done to me and me being forced to to serve and to do things against my will. I'm glad that you like what I wrote and as for intentional or not, at the time I was trying to end my life every chance I got if that answers anything.
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August 6, 2016


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