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In the rain with a knife

Getting ready to end my life

As each rain drop hits my face

I start to remember all my pain

I drop the knife to the ground

Does not even make a sound

Soon tears start to roll down my face

Just more drops in the Rain

Somehow each tear that fell

Made my pain start to heal

I took my face and looked to the sky

But something soon caught my eye

A single flower stood in the grass

Made me want to try and ask

But instead I Smiled and Walked away

Got to live another day

Just more tear drops in the rain
Something I wrote a while back
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PoisonHorsie Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2016
How far back? This is great. Intentional or not, that flower is an wonderful metaphor for Ponies.
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HazetheHawk13 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 7, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I don't know how far back but I know that at the time that I was still being held =as a slave and having horrible things done to me and me being forced to to serve and to do things against my will. I'm glad that you like what I wrote and as for intentional or not, at the time I was trying to end my life every chance I got if that answers anything.
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